Well...
The backround was repeating the waterfall,you used different sprites for tails,the sprites had white pixel spots (lazyness :P) and shadow was a Gif XD
So... 5/10 but for your second animation....6/10...
Well...
The backround was repeating the waterfall,you used different sprites for tails,the sprites had white pixel spots (lazyness :P) and shadow was a Gif XD
So... 5/10 but for your second animation....6/10...
thanks il try and sort most of those out in my next animation but what is wrong with shadow bieing a Gif.
Potential,nice..
It has a good style,i see you used toonboom?
Anyway,keep up the good work...
You must be refering to the 3d camera movements. Unfortunately i don't have toonboom(yet). I used flash and after effects
It covered the basics
Now that youve covered the basics of flash your ready to move onto...
Blurs,glows,shadows,gradients,tints,i nverts,properties, and some other stuff... Great for a first flash!
Yep. Im planning on implementing blur and inverts and stuff, but as for shading and tints, Im trying to keep the theme prtty simple. Thanks though :D
^_^ Good Job
the only parts i didnt like were the in-fluidness like mouth movement or him having the hat put on him... just work on that,everything else was good and it had a good plot... 9/10!
yea i didn't lip sync cus i had very little time
Not as dramatic as i hoped...
You didnt build any climax to the part where i felt sad... you just said "have a sad christmas" which was a bit rude... the animation was short... but thats ok :3 ill give it a 6...
Mmkay...
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The backround was white :|
make sure you put alot of detail into each frame,backrounds make it look much better.I hope this will be useful next animation u make ^_^
Anyways,good job...the smoke effects are best!
ill put a backround in the next one
Haha
Well,that was a good one,one question though,is that gun turrent the portal turrent?
Anyways,keep it up,i hope to see a X-mas special ^_^!!
TURRENT?! WHATS A TURRENT?! oh you mean TURRET! get it right please xP anyway, yeah thanx for the review, and yeah it is the portals gun, lol :D and yeah expect the christmas special to be out.... well, when its near xmas.
My name is Anthony,and on youtube im known as Gamerblade or G15. Now when i grow up id like to be an Flash Animator,director,or game designer,or even a cartoonist.Im no older than an average animator.. Im working on some projects so just you wait!
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